Hi, my name is Jared I am a year 6 I play rugby and cricket and I like to ride my motorbike.
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This is my week 10 sick sentences. The hardest part was doing the sentence slide.
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For rotations, for the last few weeks, a guy has been coming in and teaching us how to play and a few games. This week I went and week playe...
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This is my inquiry So what?" I created a brochure online to show my learning about the question 'Should animals be kept in zoos?...

cool Jared but next time I think you could add more detail in your writing.
ReplyDeleteGreat job including information from our story in your explanation, Jared. Could you have told us any more about the story? Could you have talked about what happens if the boys find something interesting? :)
ReplyDeleteAlso please make sure you check your punctuation before you publish, you have some full stops in funny places!
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