Hi, my name is Jared I am a year 6 I play rugby and cricket and I like to ride my motorbike.
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This is my week 10 sick sentences. The hardest part was doing the sentence slide.
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This week for sick sentences was an eagle with a bee. The hardest part was doing the sentences slide because I couldn't think of anythin...

Could you give us a little more info here? What has been happening in our story?
ReplyDeleteGood job going back and adding some detail. Just remember that it's really important to think about your readers, and to check that your explanation would make sense to someone who hasn't read our story.
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